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Primordial - Title by 000Fesbra000 Primordial - Title by 000Fesbra000
Before the light,
there was another universe,
where darkness, pain and horror inhabited.
A tension in between mirrors,
that would unshackle perversion for all things 
and destructive madness.
This was evil.

True darkness lurks deep in the heart of men,
and in their mind they're capable to bend it at will
for a while.

As creation receded and darkness vanquished the last bastion of hope,
time ceased to flow.
Creating a cradle for chaos,
where matter bent and swirled under unspeakable horrors.
Releasing the first beings into this plain.

As an answer to the wail of these beings,
this universe released light.
And they saw it was bad.
For it hurt them and drained them of their action.
Time aged them, and they became rocks.
Then they burnt wildly creating more light,
and everything else started to exist.

- Kh'Aba, Master Conjurer
Words from The Book of the Forgotten 

Inspired by the music of Lustmord.
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Red both creates an instinctual feeling and strong passionate emotions. Along with a bright red long slit, which could, for example, demonstrate a serpent eye, which is a human's natural fear.

At the top of the page you also have a very commanding word "observe" and a good distance below, which acts as a visual comma, you have the rest of the words which have a poem feeling.

Along with that you also inserted what I could describe as a mythical legend like writing, which speaks of times before us that were unstable destructive and evil. Very powerful image.

As for technique, I do not see anything particularly fascinating. But good tactics are not needed to make something amazing.Well done.
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Subaqueous Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2017  Student General Artist
Bloody well done!!
HerbivoreRoss Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2017
Really beautiful artwork and I absolutely love the writing too!
Crysomandiaz Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
This makes me want to write.
Xquid Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Dramatic in its simplicity.
RJAmakusa Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2017
This looks like a poster to a Epic movie that was never made.
TariToons Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2017  Student General Artist
Oh, that is clever :D
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